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i prefer b/w because that yelow is soo strong

 

yuck, its crap tbh... lol sorr to say but its just... bad.

 

"yuck, its crap tbh... lol sorr to say but its just... bad. "
Nice help you are.... i think you should take a look at yourself before you blam anyone.
Next time keep in mind no piece of art is ever perfect, and art is not subject too good or bad just tastes.


B/W is better because the tones hide the fact that the right side & the wire frame c4d is hugely over sharpend.
Try going back through your layers and removing the sharpend look to the right, and the grey lines in the coloured version, this alone will make it 5-10x better. If anything thoes grey lines should be line the yellow on the bottom right.

Gl. Keep working it, if you want.

 

The yellow is way too strong and the wireframe is indeed too oversharpened.

I liked the idea though.

 

I like an awesome v2 for color.

 

Colorless is definitely better. Nice and simple.

 

Yellow is a bit too strong IMO. B/w one is better

Wireframe is oversharpened =/