I hjust love what you did on the text i think the tag is really sweet only one thing. mayb others noticed it too. but i;m not trying to be a sex maniak here.. but why does the focal bring me too the boobs ? I mean if i look at it the focal goes to the render. and from there I slide down.
wow really nice, great affects and great colours! I Really like the text aswell, those circle things look great the ony thing i would say is the bright bits on the right i think they dont look that good butthats it...They dont make the sig look rubbish or anything but just something to impove on i guess.
thanks for taking the time to look and point that out to me I will see what I can do for a second version