This will seem harsh but it's only my personal preference, it doesn't reflect anyone elses. 3/10. The colors are good, the text is alright, the brushes are cool but they just don't have any flow. If you redo it with the same stuff just maybe a better background and a render or something, I am sure it'll be hot. Sorry.
7/10 Everything is good except the colours. The monochromatic colour scheme doesn't do justice to the nicely composed effects you have. A more appealing colour scheme will certainly make it a super sig. (Lol I have no proper sigs for rating. )
7/10 to first, work on the monotone colors & effects. 8.5/10 to second, still monotone but very cool. Rate this one:
Kovan: That looks awesome. Love how he is half hidden. Oh, and BTW awesome effects on the text, wish I could do that with Gimp. <_< 8/10 Will somebody rate mine please?