The colors in this tag are fairly nice, although im not to sure they go with a movie such as fight club. That stock / render looks pretty nice, i am in love with that vectorized feeling you gave it. Also, the pen tooling is really well done. Text is not bad, but im not really liking the placement for it, simply because IMO it takes away from the focal. The smudging to the left and right of the focal is a tad stale, and could use a few more effects, then again.. i can see your major focus was to work on the effects around the focal, which is executed well.
thanks man i been trying to work on my text for some reason i cant get it down and thx for the great C&C =]