cmment pls ^_^

 

looks old school from back in the day

tut it and bring it back :lol:

i like the look and feel of this one m8 good job

 

thats hot, tut of that would be cool indeed ^_^

 

Tit would be cool.

 

I like the colors

 

Colors and effects are great.

You should crop a bit of that empty space.

Great job overall.

 

The colors on the right side look horribly washed out, yet the colors on the left are fine
I suggest fixing up the right side to the point where the colors on it are not washed out. Not a big fan of neg. Space.. just doesnt really appeal to me, so maybe add a few more effects to the left side? Even a few distorations and displacements would do just fine. Text is fairly decent.. but the placement isnt that great, because it is not too close to the focal.. it takes focus off of the focal. The smudging is pretty nice as well, but if you really want to add depth, i suggest burning the edges of the lighting sources held in the smudging.

 

thanks for all the feedback i apreciate it and consider the tut done but I will ned to make some slight modifications to it to smooth it out and fix the layout and neg space so expect it within a week

 

Very nice.

Good job.

 

the colors are not washed out on right side there just a different color and the typo placement is fine cause it gives more viewing time and neg space fill...anymore distortion effects will ruin the compo also its fine as is bro great job...

 

ok i trust your word bro I will make a tut directly from the original thanks for throwing that in before it was too late

 

Colours look fine to me.

Whether you like it or not, negative space is necessary in all works. Without it, how the f*ck would we accomplish focal or composition? You've seen beginner's work (and probably your own), and it's just non stop effects and action everywhere, and TBH, it looks terrible.

Text is awesome. A huge improvement compared to Galiones previous work. TBH, I don't get what you mean by poor placement. It's not about how close to the focal it is. It's about where it is in the order of emphasis is in your work. As long as you establish this, it doesn't matter where it goes. By general rule, I work it out as secondary to focal in smudge/abstract/general works, and last in reality pieces, as you need to blend the text into the scene, otherwise it defeats the purpose of making reality pieces.


Big ups, Gali. One of your best works I've seen from you. If anyone tells you to change it, ignore them.

 

thanks bro I appreciate the support and all that I will for sure keep it as is

thanks for cementing it in ^_^

 

lovely smudging and color. That looks hot.