Fate Stay Night[lp]

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V2:

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BUMP..

 

First is better.. the colors in the second look washed out imo..
Personally I dont like smudge very much in Large Art, only if you're good at it like huMACs Lps..
Its also a bit chaotic..
thses kind of LPs are hard lol.. same as C4D Lps..

Anyway text is allright, could use some improvement tho, dont really like the big S

 

its an "F"

but thx for the CnC dude.

 

Oh yeah should have payed attention to the title lolz.. doesnt look like an F to me..

Oh yeah its not dude.. dont have a penz0r..

 

I think I just had...yep I did.

It's like sex on the screen.

Photoshop Porn.

 

thx dude, Maybe i should mark it adult..lol?

 

I think that would be best.

 

haha, im not going to though.

 

its very nice man gj, but on the 2nd one the bright red color near her elbow region is really distracting it pulls my attention to it and not the rest of the piece so thats what i would change..

 

well, the b/w is the original so i wont worry about errors in the colored version. thx for comments ^^