I know it isn't much, but it is my first. What else can I add or take away to give it more depth and flow? Instead of making an entire new thread, I'll just add my new pic here: How's this one, good bad, horrible? I appreciate all of the help guys, it means a lot!
Yeah, I know the dimensions are off, I wasn't originally going to make sig and wasn't planning on this being a sig, but I don't see any other applicable place to put this.