Halo.

i dont know what else i could do, or anywhere i could put text lol

V1




V2



V3



CnC please <3

 

v2 is really appealing to me,just take out the lighting ball, top left

 

Looks ok
Kinda bright tbh and the left side of master chief looks odd.
the c4d on the bottomright sticks out tbh.

 

ok thanks for the comments

Added another version lol

 

bump lol =/

 

I think Master Chief is too blurred(lol this coming from me) and maybe tone down the sparks a tad, just a tad as if you tone them down too much they wont ahve any effect, I think I like v.2 best because you can see the planet more clearly, otherwise I like it. Keep it up.

Oh an also I would try sharpening up master chief.

 

The colors don't flow good, but not bad, may look better in black and white.

 

thanks for the honesty guys

 

not bad bro, i find the background too sharp and overcrowded, looks sweet appart from that

 

thanks for the comment bro, i'm working on my b/g =]