Well, I decided if I ever wanted to get into a decent crew, I'd have to show some kind of LP, so I made one ^_^ Besides the retarded overcontrast, C&C?
thanks ^_^ Reminds me of a girly-ish version of the beginning of Bioshock when they introduce the underwater city
Actually good for a first, better then most peoples first attempt. Couple of things ; - It's too small to really be classed a LP. - A bit too monotone. - Text is distracting from the focal. All comes with practice, good start. ^^
to add to broken's reply I would have to say also a good way to help blend the render in with the smudging is to put the render in front of it and erase at a very low opcaity the areas that would be blended with the smudge cause right now there is really no blending and makes the smudge look like a stand out smudge and not really an effect that should be apart of the render that is all I can really find to help you out more
Its good for a first but you still have a lot to learn.. First off its the color if you want to make a good LP then dont make it this monotone.. I disslike monotone C4D pieces bigtime.. Second try to be orriginal, C4D+ smudge is really whored.. and imo the smudge at the edges dont look that good tbh Like you said fix the contrast and work on your text.. Keep practising..
