Just a tad oversharpened. Maybe blur some of the edges of the render/focal to give it more depth. As for te text, it's pretty good IMO, but it might be one or two levels too small for my eyes' comfort. Goodwork anyways! I love the color tone as well as the smudging.
With the text thing... My photoshop messed up and size 10 was like teh size of 30 lol that is like 2-3 pt... the tutorial was... hold on 1 sec.. don't know what that light is from... ill try and fix it http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=363190 there.. Thanks you guys..