New Masterchief

Well here it is, a new masterchief.

V.1


V.2


V.3


V.4


Final Product


What you guys think? What needs touching up, and is it better than my Current's or Fave's?

 

Looks pretty sweet. My only complaint is how the right side of his helmet looks like its cut off.

 

meh border doesn't really work in this one and its too brightened imo but yeah i'd also work on livening up the left and right sides a bit they look kind of repetitiveee I'd make your text horizontal too, and a plain font but kind of big but near your render. Also i'd add some sub-text to add a little more..umph...to the text =]

 

Kay thanks for your comments, did what you said for the text, ne more comments?

 

ya do kinda what u did with ur text in the later versions except move it down more to the middle by the render

 

Ok there, this is my final product, I think I am finished now.

 

lol good now make another! and work on effects and so on and so forth =] ur progressin lots keep it up