well i wanted to see how many c4d's i could put in a sig and im not real happy with the outcome haha but it looks decent V2 mehhh any better? c&c?
The text needs would, and it really lacks the stock being the focal point, at least in my eyes, but nice try. I'd say it went ok for a high number of c4ds. How many did you use?
im not fixin it =] i just want comments and critisism for my next one =] i appreciate the thoughts guys keep em commin'
I agree, the focul's a bit weak imo. Blur some of that bg and it'll look a lot better. A bit too much imo but cool idea. lol Text is no good. But tighten it up a bit and it's nice.
Your focal just needs work here, it blends in too much, gets lost in the c4d's. Also don't center your focal, it's bad composition.
thanx a lot guys i appreciate it and thank you kennedy never thought about moving the render i always kept it in the mid. and that's why i could never figure out why my compo wasn't the best ima try to fix up the stuff =]
Ye I think V.1 is bette too, maybe you could try and smudge some of the right side of the render to make it flow with the bg, and also try and multicolour the bg, the monotone kind of really takes focus off the render, that might help. Otherwise I really like the style.
I think both would look better as one. The text doesn't show up as well in the first one, but I like how the character is in the center and creates more of a focal point. The second one's right side just seem too distracting to me, but the text reads a lot more promptly. Nice work though.
