Always Watch Your Back In Sin City

second in serie

 

Gnarly.

 

its so raw it works perfectly. i love it

 

thanks

 

the text ruins its and the guy in yellow jus looks creepylol, the lighting could be lil better but other then that its nice for some strange reason.

 

yea i wasnt too happy about the text myself either what could i improve on the lightning btw? thought it was good ^^

 

I'm not really liking this, the yellow guy doesn't fit there and the bg isn't very detailed.
Nice concept though, I gotta give you that.

You can't really see here it's coming from, you need a source.

 

delete the yellow guy xD
or atleast don't make him yellow

but the rest looks good imo
good job

 

he already was yellow, thats how it is in the movie too