Arguably One Of My Best

Well here it is, I think one of my best pieces of work.

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Wut u guys think now?

BTW : This is the first time I am doing this kind of style, just an experiment but thought it turned out good.

 

looks good too much white though

 

Way too much white, but not bad. Text hurts the focal, you might want lose the text.

 

White isn't working at all.

Tag is a bit too wide.

 

Wat about now, is it too bright now?

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Whats that thing on the right? Also, your two currents are way more better imo.

 

It's a Starcraft 2 Marine Render, think I found it here.