C4d Sig

this is my attempt at a sig with using a c4d instead of a render as the focal



i am still quite new to sig making just thought ill post see what you guys think


V2 does this 1 look better

 

Still new at it and you better than me! You have a huge amount of contrash between the render and bg, try playing with the colors
on the c4d untill it complaments the bg but still stands out.

Thats the best thing I can say.

 

ok thanks for advice

 

bump

 

IMO V1 is better, but not bad, great effects.

 

V1 is definately better.

Good job. It could use more work but what you have now is nice.

 

thanks alot people for the comments

 

i like V2.