Colors don't fit with the render, would like to see a b/w version. It's also a bit overcontrasted to the direct right of the render. Effects and depth are cool, flow is ok.
i think the black and white version looks so much better as the colloured one jus dont work for me, i think the colouring is a bit wrong so thats why it dont flow. Th blaack and white is much better u cant really read the text so maybe make it lil bigger so it looks better.
The B&W is alright. But it's way better than the over-contrasted colored one. It could use some more blending on the left side as well.
Colors are way too saturated and the b/w ones are really boring. Sorry dude, I don't much like either version ;(
