Feel The Music

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Vendetta357, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. Vendetta357

    Vendetta357 Well-Known Member

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    Unsure about the text. Any suggestions?
     
  2. Kiyaa

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    I actually like the stock placement. You could put it in the middle, and then place c4ds on each side of her to create more flow. If you move the c4ds closer to her body I think you might like the outcome better. The lighting is misplaced. Instead of having it over her hair, it should be coming up by her shoulder (notice how her neck/shoulder area is the brightest spot of her body.) As for the text, I think it would look better in the middle of those c4ds and maybe make it a different color.

    The tag really has potential, I like it. The current flow and color are nice. I love the stock, too *points to sig* lol
     
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    Wow. This is random. I based it on the tut you made. I'll mess with it some more eventually. Thanks.
     
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    Text throws it ... so do the crosses.
     
  5. Sick of Air

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    The render is supposed to be the focal... But the text and "glitters" are the focals in my opinion.
     

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