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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .Zeldafan, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. Dec 30, 2007 at 6:05 PM #1
    .Zeldafan

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    I like it. C&C please. :)
     
  2. Dec 30, 2007 at 6:06 PM #2
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    7/10

    like the text
     
  3. Dec 30, 2007 at 6:32 PM #3
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    remove the text and it will look alot better.
     
  4. Dec 30, 2007 at 6:56 PM #4
    White Tiger

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    I love the colors and softness of the overall sig, but that text has got to go. Im sorry, but it stands out way too much; no blending, no color flow, just flat abstract-style black and white. Kind of kills the flow, you know?
     
  5. Dec 30, 2007 at 6:59 PM #5
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    not bad i like a few effects, but the text, and that blurr? or distortion near her face and covering part of her could be removed a bit
     
  6. Dec 30, 2007 at 9:14 PM #6
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    +Colors
    +Atmo/Feel
    +Flow
    ~Right side of the tag is kinda "meh"
    ~Foreground FX
    ~FX in General (Needs more variety and the lines make the tag more repetetive)
    -Text
    -That area right above the "ENT" in Reverent is waay weird

    Looks like a WIP to me but you have something real good going just fix up text and clean up certain parts and fix the fx (I would take out the lines to the right because they are repetitive and add some more foreground fx) Great job on the whole "soft" feel/atmo.
     
  7. Dec 30, 2007 at 10:23 PM #7
    xdude28

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    isn't the game revenant wings??? but anyway nice i like it
     
  8. Dec 30, 2007 at 11:20 PM #8
    .Zeldafan

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    hahhaa, you're right. I'm removing the text so I guess it doesn't matter.
     
  9. Dec 30, 2007 at 11:57 PM #9
    ikky

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    kill the text imo. rest is aight.
     
  10. Dec 31, 2007 at 11:34 AM #10
    PhanE

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    awesome smudge bad text.
     
  11. Dec 31, 2007 at 11:57 AM #11
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    Text is too hard for the soft look of the sig.
     
  12. Dec 31, 2007 at 1:35 PM #12
    becks

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    not bad the text isnt the best i think its just the font maybe so try sumthing different, clipping mask text usually does look good. the smudge could hve been a lot better and u got some near the face of the person.Maybe reduce it near the face or sumthing. Or sharpen the thing or sumthing. Overall good work.
     

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