imo, its a bit bright andthe effectz are too thick on the render, tone it down a bit and i think it'll be better, looksto haqve the potential to be sick
Glowy effect looks like total crap. Beyond doubt. Can't tell if the rest is any good because that's the only thing visible. 1) the glow is an extremely old and dead style 2) it never looked good really, even when it was popular and 3) you haven't even done it well.