Spiderman

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  1. KyuZero

    KyuZero Well-Known Member

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    C&C please.
     
  2. Chris*

    Chris* Well-Known Member

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    Many Spiderman tags lately.

    Anyways this one looks pretty good, only some smudge parts look oversharpened.
     
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    Wow, very nice, one of the best sigs I've seen in a long time, you should write a tut on this.
     
  4. KyuZero

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    Thanks, but write a tut on it? I don't think it's that good.
     
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    Very nice tag, mate, only a bit unoriginal. :P
     
  6. matt s

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    Nice work :)
     
  7. KyuZero

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    Thanks :D but how is it unoriginal? Because it's a spiderman tag?
     
  8. Wamm

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    Awesome tag
     
  9. Kiyaa

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    I think a small lightsource above his head would make the sig a little better. Other than that, it's a lovely sig :)
     
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    Your lighting is completely wrong, the light comes from above(leftish) and not under.
     
  11. USSilentSniper

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    Good but not tut worthy IMO.
    The text needs work and the focal isn't too great either.
    and that too.

    Nice work, just try to correct those things.
     
  12. KyuZero

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    Yeah the lighting is off. I added a version 2, hopefully this fixes the lighting problem
     
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    Is this really the first siggy you've ever seen? O_O

    Ummm... this is pretty much exactly how every signature using that stock/render turns out. I'd suggest you work on the things listed above, and your colouring.
     
  14. Kiyaa

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    The top lighting would look better just white because thats the color of the light thats hitting his suit :P
     

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