nice choice of main render rly like the background to feel likes its missing someting dont know what it is
I dislike the lighting. The effects are okay but the flow is all over the place. And the effect on the right that is blurry seems like it should be in the foreground, thus, sharpened. Lacks a definite focal point. A little monotone. Keep at it bro.
lighting has always kind of been a fault for me any suggestions in that area? as for the effects and such i take responsibility for those so ill try to work around that and give it a bit more of a focal point thanks for the comment