Jay-zzzzzzz

i would move the black stuff in foreground to a deeper layer and clear up the focal around his face...its not bad, that lone plus sign is just thur add a few more or remove it, remember a composition rule in color and using effect elements is to use at least 3....

 

Lookin' good ^_^

 

I have good impressions on this tag: the smudging and the c4ds are well placed. Good work.

 

thanks dudes
i increased contrast of his face a bit

 

desaturate a bit


bw

 

bump