Bit sharp over the render, especially the face and text. Un sharpen it a little and it would be good. GJ
Yup too sharp. But the compo's spot on. Love the style. ^_^ Looks good bro. Maybe unblur some of the bg as well. It'll look a bit better if it's not all on the same plane like that.
the lq render kinda ruins it :/ try un blurring some of the bg. it makes your fx and smudging unappealing