Vengence

Here it is. I hope you like it.



Yes, I know the text sucks.

 

I dont want to be mean, but you asked for cnc so:
Text does suck,
Looks a bit monotone,
The white wireframe thing you have going on is kind of bleh,
No depth,
Focal is kind of off,
No real flow or texture to the bg.

Work on those things.

 

I used a texture on the backround.

I see what you're saying though, thanks for the comment!

 

hmm it looks kinda cool
how you said text def sucks
i think you could have done something more for blending the render.
i mean the right side of the render.
nice job though

 

Depth could be improved but overall, nice.

 

not bad, but this one actually could use a little depth, such as behind the focal
i kinda like what you did, but its a little lackinig

and I dont see any reason to say something about the text considering
you already know