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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .brokengenius, Dec 23, 2007.

  1. .brokengenius

    .brokengenius Well-Known Member

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  2. J-G

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    its interesting to say the least but i dont rly know what i'm looking at though
     
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    I like it. Nice stuff.
     
  4. .Zeldafan

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    I can't tell what it is either.
     
  5. Hoplite_A2

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    Very tight layout. ;)
    The focul is very, VERY weak though. :(
    I can't even see what the sprite is doing...
    I think it would be a much better abstract. ;)

    Still,
    very nice composition. :D
     
  6. eXiTWouNdZz

    eXiTWouNdZz Well-Known Member

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    You can barely see, but it's a punching sprite. I could barely tell till hoplite pointed it out. Not horrible, but the comp and flow is way off, way to busy.
     
  7. Tushar

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    too messy, the flows all over the place imo
    focal weak
    maybe make the sprite color'd?
    idk suggesting.
     
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    Just make the sprite colored, it would look sick!
    I love the bg, its very chaotic and im a sucker for that.
     
  9. Kennedy

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    I don't know if you wanted it to be messy or not but at least highlight the focal someway, it kinda blends in there too much(weak focal)
    Get rid of that lion on down left, it doesn't really work imo

    Compo is cool tho!
     

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