Akatsuki

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by sarbjit, Dec 23, 2007.

  1. sarbjit

    sarbjit Well-Known Member

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    Please comment :)
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    I love the text, but the flow is off, and the render doesn't seem to fit. IMO it's because the whole sig is contrasted except for the render.
     
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    yup, agree. try blending the render into the bg maybe its getting flow and add some curves or stuff like that. makes it look and flow better.
     
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    Any Better?
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    I think the render is a tad overblended, now that I think about it. He fits in a tad better but you can't see any of his lower body that's in the sig and his head is kind of overblended a tad as well.
     
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    Maybe a tad overblended,
    but I think it looks pretty good.
    The effects are nice. ;)

    Just work on flow, more specific lighting and
    maybe trying to make your focul a tad more pronounced. ;)

    good work
     

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