I love the text, but the flow is off, and the render doesn't seem to fit. IMO it's because the whole sig is contrasted except for the render.
yup, agree. try blending the render into the bg maybe its getting flow and add some curves or stuff like that. makes it look and flow better.
I think the render is a tad overblended, now that I think about it. He fits in a tad better but you can't see any of his lower body that's in the sig and his head is kind of overblended a tad as well.
Maybe a tad overblended, but I think it looks pretty good. The effects are nice. Just work on flow, more specific lighting and maybe trying to make your focul a tad more pronounced. good work