Take it off that slant, that makes it look terrible. Other than that, the render needs to stock out more, and your name looks terrible with that huge stroke on it. The BG isnt that bad.
The slant is terrible, and the text on the right is bad. Usually, you shouldn't have text in two different places. Other than that, it's overcontrasted, but if you fix these problems it could be a decent sig.
^^^ Agreed. I think the tilt absolutely kills the crap out of it. Off to a good start though. If you stick around, you're bound to get good.