Inhale - Breath In

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  1. USSilentSniper

    USSilentSniper Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">I am the master of verts!! lol not really.
    New stuff again im loving this experimentation phase. Learning lots of cool stuff for only defaults.
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    Inhale
    Exhale
    Breath In
    Breath Out
    Only this
    Time stops
    Breath It
    Live It
    My God
    Save It
    You Extol
    Ill Breath
    My Narcotic

    Inhale - Trent</div>
     
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    holy ---- man, that is awesome!

    I love everything about it. Awesome job
     
  3. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks! :D
     
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    this peice is awsome!
    good job bro..
     
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    nice man...

    liked it nore that ur previous
     
  6. [.BC.] entropy

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    the verse is incredible this time.

    i think a little judicious sharpening would help on the tag.
     
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    Nice vert man! Lovin this one!

    Dont care much for the poem though.
    Try writing in haikus. They are always interesting.
     
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    maybe lessen the blur a bit? just looks a little too blurry. Looks great though and I love the poem :)
     
  9. _BrOkE_____

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    I think the blur is what makes it so beast
    Sharpen the blur? (oxymoron :D)
     
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    wow :) very coool...i love your stuff!!! :)
     
  11. USSilentSniper

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    Thanks for all the comments. I wanted it really blurry to give more of a "airy" feel to go with "Inhale".

    I guess i should read up on how to write poetry, more people are actually commenting on that now.
     
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    Read romantic period stuff like Wordworth and Blake, it's good stuff
     
  13. USSilentSniper

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    OK ill try to check it out sometime.
     
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    yeah its a cool vert nice flow
     
  15. Twisted Black

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    Yea your verts are really nicely done....refreshing to the eye....

    and this poem I like the most from your other ones...really nicely done as well...

    lol it would be sick to see you some how incorporate the poems into the actual verts...thats just an idea though...

    Great stuff! B)
     

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