mhh....i think its really hot except this checkerboard style in the bg. could it be that the light comes from he right side?
The checkers stuff would look much better if it were in shades of green/blue/any color that could blend in with the rest of the tag. Focal looks LQ and I'd get rid of the part with the displacement thing on the lighting spot, at the right. Nice tag otherwise.
i like, but im not a fan of the little border, even though its barely noticable. good work on this though.