It all seems like C4D's, nothing's wrong with C4D's, it's just thee best when there used to create an environment or effect, where as thos just look like C4D's and don't blend.
Amazing dude. I love the colors and the chaotic bg and effects. I like the text for this one also. Keep up the good work man!
The text is bad. I agree with sarbjit. I think you should try to blend it a bit more and get a better flow working.
i like it, the text isnt my most favorite thing about it though, everything is nice in my opinion. good work.