I used less effects and tried to keep this one clean. Friend of mine helped me by starting off the BG. He chose to remain anonymous. CnC?
This looks amazing. The text is nice and so are the effects. Just remove the to lines that come out of his shoulders.
I know you guys don't like the lines that come from behind him but without them there is a lot of bland and boring space.
Basically what everyone else said, get rid of the 2 lines But the text and effects are cool, nice job.