The Orb - Omg Its Back!

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  1. USSilentSniper

    USSilentSniper Well-Known Member

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    <div align="center">Check it out, close to being my favorite sig of all time.
    Originally started out of boredom, but i discovered an awesome technique to creat depth and this is the product.
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    I feel nothing
    I was a shell
    Waste surrounds me
    I only see you
    But you are gone
    Numb to me
    I miss it, you
    I've numbed myself
    To try
    To forget you
    But you're still there
    We are
    Numb.

    Numbness - Trent</div>
     
  2. J-G

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    sweet to say the least rly nice job love the colors and the poem that is attached
     
  3. _BrOkE_____

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    Very interesting tag.
    Try making the orb look like a moon, that would be hot :D (Moon over Ocean :P)
    For your poetry, try using more metaphor and personify the subject you're writing about. Make us understand EXACTLY how you feel about it, and overall, make it flow.
    Read some of Poe's poetry, The Raven yells flow and rhythm :P
     
  4. USSilentSniper

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    thank you.
     
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    Everything you do is so deep and full of emotion. I love it and I'm starting to take a liking to your poetry as well.
     
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    love the tag, can't really say i'm a poet :D
     
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    The tag is nice, but I would like to see the orb look more... orby.
    The text sucks.
     
  8. USSilentSniper

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    Don't get me started on the orb...lol. And yeah my text usually isn't that good.

    Thanks for the comments.
     

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