Taste It - That's Right

<div align="center">New style abstract, hope you guys like it.
I originally made it as a normal sig, but i thought it would look good as a vert.
Comments and guesses welcome. lol.


The taste of blood
Bitter, regretful
Yet you still drink
Death is your friend
I want to save you
You always wanted change
Now you have
Taste It
Regret It
Then, Taste again.
Taste It - Trent</div>

 

interesting, macabre and dark.

I like.

the poem itself is a little lackluster, bad rythmn and flow.

 

Thanks.
I never really learned to write poetry which is why it's not that good.

 

i prefer the colored versions you do alot better this one seems odd, the vert is better imo

 

thanks, what do you mean by colored?

 

Straight up&down.
I love it bro. ^_^

Great stuff, maybe a tad oversharp though.

Nice work

 

Looks nice man....I really like the vert.... B)

 

I like it. The colour looks a lot like blood.

Some sort of vampire theme going on, it reminds me that. I see you were also after something like that.

Nice work.

 

Thanks, and no it has nothing to do with vampire's i would never be that obvious.

 

It's sharp, but not TOO sharp (personally I like sharp tags)

 

nice tag mate. blood theme!

 

Looks sweet. I'm gunna throw out a generalized guess and say you used a combination of filters.

Whoever said macabre to describe it hit it right on the nail. That's the perfect word. And the poem is very intense and dark. Great stuff, don't even worry if your poems aren't structured "correctly" because you have poetic license to do whatever you want.

 

sorry to dark for me...

 

Thanks guys, love the comments.

 

its a bit to monotone try adding some orange in to it