to messy and complicated. the render doesnt really stand out and theres no focal. no depth, and text is bad. sorry for the really negative comment. keep trying, i think youd find the tutorial section really usefull. gj man
its good throw some effects on that render to make it stand out some more unbusy the background and it would be better IMO
Woot! Feedback Yes, well, attempt one didn't end up as I planned it too, but, I'll take the suggestions into consideration! Thanks everyone.