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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Asyd, Dec 20, 2007.

  1. Asyd

    Asyd Well-Known Member

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    I know the text is bad. >_>
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    Collab with someone on another forum.
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    Feel I'm slowly improving, your opinion? CnC please. :3</div>
     
  2. Chris*

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    You are getting good indeed, but try some new styles.
     
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    the first one is very cool man I really like it
     
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    Thanks, and yeah Chris, I know my style is repetitive, I'm developing some new work.
     
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    Lol, thanks for the link. o_O
     
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    some great work , i actually love the first (B+W version) alot . the effects dashing around the renders houlders make for great light work blending skills
     
  8. Asyd

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    Glad you like it.
     
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    Bump.
     
  10. Hoplite_A2

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    I like the first and the collab an the "volcom" one.

    1st tag:
    • Very nice flow
    • Good colors
    • Good lighting
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    • Innefective focul, don't put too many effects on your focul (his head for example. ;) )
    • The black spot next to his head is no good.

    2nd tag:
    • also nice flow
    • also great colors
    • Very effective focul point
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    • Lighting could be better, I know it's hard with smudge tags, but try to get the "white smudges" where your light source would go.
    • Text, but you know about that. ^_^
    • I would throw in some tight effect c4ds in front of the render, just small adjustments.

    3rd tag:
    • Way cool composition. ;)
    • Effective focul point.
    • Good effects, smudging and lighting.
    • not much to critique. ;)

    4th tag:
    I really don't like it, sorry.


    Great stuff bro, you're getting a lot better. ^_^
     
  11. Asyd

    Asyd Well-Known Member

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    Thanks hoplite, awesome CnC as usual. <3
     
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    Final bump for this thread. <.<
     
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    the first one is prett nice.
     
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    getting there dude, text is a big buzz kill imo, but there getting better.

    Try more blending.
     
  15. ThugRider

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    Every sig you posted is better then the last one. You can tell some are better then the others, that means you're improving. ;)

    The rest has been said.

    Nice work.
     

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