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hi everybody ^_^

here's my outcome from havoc's cabal tut

C&C please;

 

to meesy imo
dont really like the text
blend the text in more
i dont like those green lines everywhere.
and i dont like the lighting

good depth though
and i like some of the fx

 

yeesh not feelin t bro, very messy and out of place, decent effects, not good fow or depth, keep working th, you have skill.

 

Try making it a little more relaxing to the eyes.

 

Really nice, it look like a c4d party lol, but it's great.

 

A bit sharp and the light source is a bit strong, but it's good otherwise.

 

ya, it's hard to see what anything (besides his head and arm) are

 

Other then the sharpness and the messiness, the rest is okay.

 

Too sharp
The lighting wasn't placed very well.
Really messy..

Nice text though imo! :]