The Bg needs a lot more depth, and its really plain. The lighting is scattered all over the place, and the render doesnt pop out enough. Look at the tuts section, you will get the hang of it.
its his FIRST sig guys, i think itsreally good if its ur first, but u have the basic technique even looks liek u smudged a bit, keep reading tuts,.
Jason477 dont be an ass... seriously :/ i think that you faded your renders a bit much and its lacking any significant effects, but that you can still improve on it without starting over entirely (unless u want to of course) we more or less always suggest tutorials to the new guys so im not gonna break that streak now, it rly does help, i promise