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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Galione, Dec 18, 2007.

  1. Galione

    Galione Well-Known Member

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    tell me what's wrong lol I just can't seem to get the experiment right with this one I know somethings wrong but I need someone else's view on this
     
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    This one is just a simple light/dark balance issue... in your other sigs/tags you have solid lighting which accentuates the colours and adds to the overall general depth and flow of the sig. In this one you have the entire left side a washed out white when in the render light is only barely touching the top corner of masterchief.

    I would recomend deleting whatever layer you have right on the left side for lighting, and then redoing a different light source near the top middle, between his helmet and shoulder maybe..

    Right side looks awesome, its the left side thats bringing it down.
     
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    those 2 lines arent workin, but it looks good tho
     
  4. Galione

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    that's exactally what I was lookign for thank you so much for the different perspective +repping you for taking the time to look
     
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    You've got some killer effects, look like falling flaming debris or asteroids w/e, but overall needs some flow, those bars aren't helping either.
     
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    new version added with the help of the crits
     
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    The new version is better, but i think we need to know what you are experimenting with and what the desired result would hypothetically look like to better help you.

    In all honesty i would forget this sig, and start over if this is for an experiment. Maybe it was just something that was messed up near the beginning.. Continually editing the sig will just compound the one error thats stopping you from reaching your goal.

    If you were attempting the 2 tone light/dark contrast i can see the problem. Left side is large and loose, Right side is small and busy.
    Because masterchief is dark it just multiplies the business of the right side exponentially disrupting the flow between the two sides.

    Next would be contrast, left side is still too washed out for right side... Although i think your stuck, cause anymore contrast and its just gonna turn into a block of white.

    Best of luck man, i like where your heading with this sig, the idea does have a lot of potential
     
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    The transition from light to dark is still a bit awkward, the new version is much better though, I like it.
     
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    I don't know what I was going for anymore I'll prolly just scrap it
     
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    2 is best
     

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