It's nice. It has coooool flow. From what I know about focal points this one doesnt have one? But maybe i'm wrong. I would like to see a few more effects on the left side.
ya left side is a little plain but i like it, other than the yellow circles and the ponytail blending in to the bg loving it, great work mate
Nice render lighning and color too. The only thing is the smudging at the left who look a little bit cheap.