Okay

Pulse

 

I think it's good! I think the right side of the render is a little bit to cluttered but does add a nice effect.

 

thanks

 

Comparing the left side to the right side, you see a huge difference. The left side is empty and plain. The right side is more appealing and looks fairly good. The smoothness of what you did is great.

 

smexy stuff ^_^