Implosion

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Advice and Comments greatly appreciated!!

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Hum... To begin I think it's a bit difficult to see what is the render because of its color and the contrast. Except this the effect is amazing but not puted in the right place. Adjust these things and your signature will be greater as it is already .

 

alot of effects covering up the focal

 

alright thanks for advice!

 

i like the effects used, but i think the displace or the duplication of the c4d or effects over the render make it blurry/hard to see, maybe try cleaning that up.

 

yea i agree with those guys

take out those effects or try not to cover your render so much

 

Really nice effects, but too much, the vocal almost isn't visible.

 

any more replies?