i like it, but it could be better, ways to improve......if i was making it, i would turn the c4d on the right side to black and white like the rest of the sig, and just have everything black and white, except the sparks flying by his hand (that's what they look like at least) leave them gold, i think it would look really nice like that, but thats just me just giving a suggestion, i like it though. keep up the good work.
The way you puted your effects over the render is very nice, but it would be better if the render was not desaturated.