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I like.

 

It's ad'v'ent children. =P

Anyways, flow looks pretty good, but I don't think those circles really suit this tag.

 

------ I spelt advent wrong lmfao. thanks for comment lol.

 

the render needs to be a little bigger imo, its nice and i like what you did

 

lol thanks pulse.

 

toomuch circles.

 

many*

 

I think you should only have 2 circles in total, render is a tad to small. Looks good, nice flow.

 

thanks.