*Please, if you are in here to look at the sig, atleast have the courtesy to C and C it. Especially since its a new style and I need to know what to improve* A little background info: ■ Its a new style for me so take it easy ■ Its supposed to look messy ■ Its made from all stocks ■ I didnt make the pink likes those were from a stock Ok here she is: Have at it
i understand the pink was the stock, but its possible to get rid of it. the text isnt good. its also a little TOO messy, but in this case messy is good. id really just work on coloring, lighting, and composition.
Thanks KP, I will try and unmessy it a bit. I'll go see what I can do And thankyou sezer for the feedback also. Anyone else?
its really messy, im not a fan of messy tags.....but some people are and people have a right to like the style they choose, but there are several things i can see that are wrong with this, like you said its a new style, but i would say.....its too overcontrasted or it could be oversharpening, i can't tell. I don't like the text and i don't think the lighting fits ( i see you have like a tanish off white light bloom in the upper right, but the light on the girl's face is on her left) but, keep up the work.
Ditch the pink. It's a terrible shade. Also, it's too sharp, and too messy. i don't care whether people say it's a matter of opinion or not, it's too messy. Also, try experimenting a bit more with composition and render placement. having the render smack in the middle is dull.