i love the effects used, i just think its a little too chaotic, and the sprite doesn't fit at all. Maybe it would be better without the sprite.
Yeh I wasnt really working on the focal point in this piece I may try removing the render and see what it comes out like.
I like it for the most part. But what throws me off, is how the sprite is so small to the astronomically large effects in the bg. :mellow: The perspective looks wierd because of that. Other than that looks good, I did have to search for the sprite. lol 2nd version's great. Really original focul point. ^_^ Good work