Angel

What do you think?





C+C Appreciated

 

Comments anyone?

 

1 looks cool

 

i love the effects used, i just think its a little too chaotic, and the sprite doesn't fit at all. Maybe it would be better without the sprite.

 

I like the abstract look to it all, it is a tad messy.

 

Work on creating a focal point

 

It's very chaotic and you didn't really establish a focal point. You may have to work on that.

 

Yeh I wasnt really working on the focal point in this piece
I may try removing the render and see what it comes out like.

 

Love number 1
Except I dont like where the sprite is placed

 

Im gonna try one without the sprite and improved focal

 

New version without the sprite and did more to establish a focal point

 

I like it for the most part.
But what throws me off, is how the sprite is
so small to the astronomically large effects in
the bg. :mellow: The perspective looks wierd because
of that.

Other than that looks good,
I did have to search for the sprite. lol

2nd version's great.
Really original focul point. ^_^

Good work