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just messing around kinda with a new style. i think im getting better.

heres the colour version;

and here is the black and white;



c&c appreciated

 

Try and bring out the render a little bit more. Also, maybe try out some other fonts, as that one just doesn't seem to fit in the sig, IMO.

 

dont see how the render isnt the focal point or being brought out. and i guess the text doesnt fit????

thanks tho.

 

bump please.. i neeed criticism not thread views please

 

Coloured is awesome.

And..Nice avatar. ;D

 

The render definately sticks out. A lot, which is what you want. Text is a bit fruity though, I love it's position, but the bevel or what ever is on it, makes it not fit with the abstract dirty rock theme.

I also agree thats a really wrecked avatar.

Being a good thing, wrecked, lol.

 

i made the avatar took like no time at all, but im glad you guys like it, you can use if you wanna, doesnt matter to me.

@ x i o u;
yeah i actually did a clipping mask for the text, but now i look at it, it does not fit in at all, got a weird effect on that one. thanks for the comment glad you like the avatar

@ dusk`;
appreciate the comment im glad you like the avatar.

and you two, thanks for commenting appreciate it

its been a day and i havent gotten crap so +rep for being good guys to both of you.

 

messy, much too messy. I like the text.

 

okay. thanks.

 

I like the colored version alot, nice work man!

 

Agree with others on text..

Maybe some layers to make the colors similar to each other for balance??

Also dont like the guitar/hand behind the render..O.O

 

Overblurred BG.
Don't like the area near his bottom left; it's messy.
Otherwise, nice depth and effects, great flow.

 

thanks guys, appreciate it!