it looks pretty good except that the text ruins the tag IMO its too big and not that thats a bad thing but you didnt do anything to it to make it look good
The left effects are very good, but the right just don't fit with the render :S Except this the lightning is good and the render is nice. Good job.
Having trouble distinguishing what the focal is exactly. Taking away the body was a bad idea. >< Green isn't working in this tag. Otherwise, interesting depth and flow.
