Cyborg

Another one for ya guys,not to sure about this one though

 

im not really liking the bg much the left side starts well then just seems to finish into nohting, but i like the coloring of it though.

 

don't really like it draven,
it lacks flow and depth and the text doesn't fit it

your currents are way way better

 

...this isnt your best work Draven. You can do better...im totally not feeling this one. sorry man.

 

Kill the text add some more to the background ( not c4d ) add some smudge and work it in with a grunge/abstract eraser then try a >newlayer>apply image > Sharpen and erase around the robot and the things you don't like and it should pop more then reapply your text.

I think this will make it stand out more.

Its not that bad but i think it could do with a few more steps.

Good depth...