Hmm... The smudging isn't too bad. There's not enough effects, the lighting looks a little wierd and the text is killing the tag. But if you threw some more effects in there and worked on lighting, it'd be pretty sweet. Keep 'em comin' bro.
looks a bit plane to me, try work abit with lightning, colors and depth but the most of it isn't half bad, just needs a bit more work
