Woah, terrible lighting and contrast there mate. Over saturated to the point of seeming monotonous. Work on that, and tighten the text up, and move it.
I think there is no focus in this one, you can basically only see the guys outline and thats it, his whole body is black exept a little of the back, also very little going on in the sig, you have a cool effect going on behind him but have soooooooooooo much blank space on the sides, All in all its an o.k. sig keep trying
Cool effect. But, the focal is a little to hard to see, lighting could use some work.. And very over saturated